Thursday, April 12, 2018

My new Metaphor poem

Emma is….. Emma is a diamond, solid and rare , one of a kind Emma is a taniwha , protective and alert, if anyone does wrong Emma is a koala , clumsy and silent , sleeping in the weekends
having a good rest
Emma is an ocean , salty and rough experiencing tough learning Emma is a pair of rugby boots , dodging
and sprinting past all her opponents to score a try

For the last couple weeks Te Ngahere  has been working on our best copy of our metaphor poems.I tried hard to find words to make my poem sound more interesting and fun to read.I really like my new copy. I think I did well because I found better words to describe myself and think this is the best I've done. I hope you like my new metaphor poem.