Writing

For the past few weeks in Te Ngahere we have been writing a diary entry. I chose to write about Hone Heke and his  point of view as well as the British's point of view because back then the wars were between the Māori and the British. My writing took me about 2 weeks to complete and make sure that it is  done to the best of my ability. For my writing I think I did well with making each paragraph make sense and have strong detail in them. Next time I could explain things in my writing to make it even better, other than that I think I did a pretty good job with my writing.